I went to the seaside
And ate up my dish
With contained of chips
And fish
Soon after that
I bought something after my fish
It was a balloon
And I made a wish
Closing my eyes
And having a smile
I made a wish
It did not take a while
I then let my balloon off
Into the sky
And I hope my wish may come true
They try.
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