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Oh, Saffron

What are you,
But - contradictory?
Strong, yet still
Invoking the delicate
Memories of flowers.

What are you,
But - warm?
Burnt and glowing
Both at the same time
The survivor and
The creator of fire.

What are you,
But - a song?
The trilling of a bird
Sitting in your heart,
Your mind's eye,
Living art, shifting
With a pulse.

What are you,
But - a thread?
Weaving together
The sound of bare feet
The sigh after a sniff
The sweat from a day's work
Making a pattern that
Of which
Has never been seen before.

What are you,
But - running?
On and on like the wind
Like scattered ashes
Like money for a drop
Like a flag, proudly raised
As the people sing praise
Like the spinning of the world-
Like it's past, half-forgotten
In the dryness of the sea

What are you,
But - ineffable?

mulishwhim

@mulishwhim

Yo. Me? I'm a professional Metaphor Creator - aka taking two things and sticking them together with determination and lots of glue to make a sandwich. (That's pretty much how I write, too. But hey, sandwiches are great, aren't they? Even if you have to look at the base idea of it.) Also known as a Thinker, Dreamer, Sleeper, and/or TalksTooMucher.

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Comments & Feedback (2)

@sleepydragon Thanks for the great challenge!

@mulishwhim Really love this! Very clever. โœจ๐ŸŒŸโœจ๐ŸŒŸ

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