Fallen from Heaven's grace, all the
better for being so breathtaking
Leave me to drown, ecstatic,
when they gave attention to me
All my will, lost, in a second's flash,
with them beside me
Matters never seemed so small,
so conquerable
Eyes of luring emerald,
my own special curse,
signature of him.
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Yo. Me? I'm a professional Metaphor Creator - aka taking two things and sticking them together with determination and lots of glue to make a sandwich. (That's pretty much how I write, too. But hey, sandwiches are great, aren't they? Even if you have to look at the base idea of it.) Also known as a Thinker, Dreamer, Sleeper, and/or TalksTooMucher.
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