It crept around me,
Where I sat,
Slipping softly,
Across my lap,
Sinking deeper,
Lost in sad,
The draining colour,
Of turning mad,
Slithering menacing,
The fatal blue,
Until it was banished,
By little, old you.
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Glad you are enjoying Uni, good luck with it all, hard work but worth it. Will think of you often and send good wishes you way. πβ¨πβ¨
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