In my face you saw the rain clouds,
Plain to see,
scattered drawn and weak,
Tattered,
unrestrained pain,
A heart lain at my feet,
Transparent, translucent eyes,
Abducted by a sin,
And as every muscle sighs,
You are the one that cries,
My tears fall for yours,
Drifting,
Across an ocean that pours,
Deep red and purple strains,
Sudden cold,
Knives of ice,
Then sudden hot,
At a roll of dice,
Curl up in my cot,
Return to old,
To what is not,
Wish for your face,
Not this other loss,
Are you in that place?
At some heaven's doors?
While I whimper,
Brine soaked floor,
Leave me torn,
Leave me to mourn.
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@minxyMolly thanks Molly - almost made me cry writing it! Haha, at least it isn't for real my dad is still about somewhere 😜
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