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So, that's it,
Been kicked,
Out for the count,
Now you've gone out,
A candle snuffed,
Goodbye
and stuffed,
What can I say?
Fallen solider in the way,
I miss you,
Come back,
We'll jump the queue,
Run from attack,
Laugh... Just laugh.
This can't be the end,
Come back, my friend?

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (9)

I like the comparison, and I find this relatable. I like this a lot ❀

Oh Nic, this is so sad 😒 not true I hope? πŸ’œ

Are you ok my sweet....as I was feeling this one?😘😘😘

@Rawren - thanks, I'm sorry it is relatable πŸ˜” @Irrational_Kimmi it is true πŸ˜₯

@misslittleDHP - I'll be fine ☺ just lost a good friend and don't know why 😳

@naaviie aww Hun, hope you're ok πŸ’” sending you hugs 😨

@naaviie awwww hugs my sweet....it certainly will be their loss to let a friend like you go my sweet...thinking of you πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

@Irrational_Kimmi @misslittleDHP - thanks guys, that's males it feel better πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

@Irrational_Kimmi @misslittleDHP - thank you for the hugs β˜ΊπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

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