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Ghosts

Silvery ghosts hang still in the air,
Standing in silence, empty stares,
Forgotten in life and now in death,
So cold, without pulse or breath,
Still statues left alone to weep,
Through restless, transient sleep,
No love, no hunger, no thirst nor lust,
Everything gone, a life left to dust,
Static souls without further purpose,
But to stand still in this ethereal circus.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Now this IS spooky. I'm writing about ghosts right now.

And by the way, more amazing words Nic

@wolfie 😳😳 creepy! Shall we go with great minds rather than simple ones? 😂😂

@naaviie lol.. If you want. I've been called worse than 'simple!'

@wolfie puuuffft who would dare insult you?! 😠

Brill!!

@Nom ☺😘

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Wow amazing poem! Gives you vivid pictures

@cookiekitty45 @ZephyrForza - thank you ☺ glad you enjoyed it.

Excellent - and spooky! 😱💜

@Irrational_Kimmi thank you! 👻

Fabulous Hun 👻👻👻👻👻👻

Wicked!! 💙👻👻👻😄😄😄💜😘😘

Really like this. I think this is one of your best. So vivid. 👏👏💚💚💚💚😘

Ethereal circus is great nic. 👏👏lovely hunny 👻👻❤

@misslittleDHP @minxyMolly - thank you very much girlies! 💚❤💜💙

@eddie12309 - really wow 😍💚✨

@leelee101 - oooh thank you sir!!! 😘😘💚✨

@naaviie well, not gushing or anything, they're all good but something 👻 about this on appeals to my love of all things ghostie,

@eddie12309 hahaha ok, thank you very much - very flattered!! ☺☺

Love it! ❤👏

@sjw thank you honey! 💚😘✨

Love it, awesome Nightdwellers poem 👏👏👏

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