The acceptance of
beautiful imperfection
and trust,
While my
heart is alive,
and dancing
Is a must,
A disjointed,
Mesmerising,
Flow of emotion,
Just like water,
And her many faces,
Talking to me
as if I were
Aphrodite's daughter,
My step has a new spring,
Even as autumn closes in,
Just marvel at how things shift,
Now you're under my skin.
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23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.
I have an empty bottle. It's here in my hand. I'm going to the beach. To fill it up with sand. I have an empty tub. I'll fit it up with dirt. Finding garden worms. So they won't get hurt.
The vulnerable caterpillar an innocent love that we give. It grows whilst it's nurtured and given a reason to live. A chrysalis of emotions hanging on a fine silk thread.
Improv challenge set by @naaviie Words: driftwood, mirror, friction, letter, jigsaw, release.
Don't lose sight of what's right, or what basks in a warm-red light, A heart un-gagged, a soul un-masked, New, trembling body, with what is asked, A strength found deep, never lost, Even in sleep, A...
I once held a precious treasure, a fragile beauty in my hands. A prism of reflective pleasure, with gentle radiance it shone. It was formed with compassion, in a furnace fired with love.
Eyes will drip, mouths will speak, Eyes will cry, hearts will sneak. Hearts will hide but eyes will peek. At first glance, the future looks bleak.
A myriad of colours make up our life; A composite for every emotion. Sombre shades for darker times; Vivacious tones for love and devotion.
Tornado and the calm sea. Mean the world to me. Spin around. Then, settle down. A laugh from a frown. Tornado and the clam sea. Mean everything to me. Twist around. Then, calming sounds.
You are one loved up lady! And it's producing some beautiful results in your writing. Particularly like the last stanza...inner warmth as the leaves turn brown & the nights draw in. Beautiful πππ
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