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How Things Shift

The acceptance of
beautiful imperfection
and trust,
While my
heart is alive,
and dancing
Is a must,

A disjointed,
Mesmerising,
Flow of emotion,
Just like water,
And her many faces,
Talking to me
as if I were
Aphrodite's daughter,

My step has a new spring,
Even as autumn closes in,
Just marvel at how things shift,
Now you're under my skin.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (7)

You've fallen hard! Happy for you πŸ’—β€πŸ’—πŸ˜˜πŸ’

This has a lovely floaty feeling to it😌

Be careful with those springy shoes. This is lovely. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

@sjw @patdolan83 @eddie12309 - dear oh dear, I thank thee very much πŸ’šβœ¨πŸ’šβœ¨

You are one loved up lady! And it's producing some beautiful results in your writing. Particularly like the last stanza...inner warmth as the leaves turn brown & the nights draw in. Beautiful 😌😘😘

@Fly10 - heh heh heh, it is an interesting feeling for sure πŸ˜‰β˜Ί thanks Leigh πŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨

I know that reviews are not really your thing but could you please direct people to my page as a I am beginning reviews. Your work is beautiful and I continue to look forward to more entertaining poems.

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