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Ice Princess

A princess lies on purple petals and silk,
Chestnut hair so dark, pale skin like milk,
A silent beauty at rest, hidden so deep,
Yet in her sleep, crystal tears do weep,
The great trees are thick, protective limbs,
While the wind whistles through, singing hymns,
A sadness locked away, a heart in a cave,
To night's darkness, this princess is a slave,
Alone behind the forest walls, out of sight,
Left in some corner of mind to dream of light,
Many Princes have failed before to reach her,
Even climbing the walls, felling each tall fir,
Unconscious tears of longing fall into a pool,
Freezing under the moonlight, silvery and cool,
Her slumbering, beautiful presence such a lure,
But for this cold curse, there is no cure.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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such flattery @RichWithey 😘 when I actually get time to sit down and write something they just keep coming! 😁

HauntingπŸ’—πŸ‘πŸ’—

@ckahn - thanks Kristina! πŸ’š Are you in china too?

Beautiful πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ‘πŸ’‹

Awesome Nic πŸ‘πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Beautiful take on a sleeping beauty. So descriptive as always. πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@sjw @leelee101 @eddie12309 - thanks guys, i appreciate it πŸ’šβ€πŸ’œπŸ’™

Beautiful words, lovin yur style 'Jon' !πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰. 😘

@DaddyDooDahs πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ quit with the Jon or i'll have to actually ca you Daddy! 😨

@naaviie ....lol.... Now that wud be weird !! No more Jon, hon, xx

@DaddyDooDahs phew!! Hehe 😘

So beautiful sob 😒

@DarkLioness aww dear sorry πŸ’šπŸ’š

This is a fabulous...fairytale of a write...gorgeous...love it very muchly😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘

@misslittleDHP - wwwwooowww thank you Kim πŸ˜πŸ’šβœ¨

@naaviie Fantastico! ..... P.s, build this:πŸ”₯ next to her and give her a rub, see if that helps πŸ˜‰ πŸ‘

@Weirdwolf 😱 you are her true love!

@naaviie Awesome πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜˜

Fantastic! Such a story!

@ZephyrForza thanks sweetie! πŸ’šπŸ’š

@naaviie what is the point of buying kindles when we can read your amazing opusses for free

@lauraessex Hahahaha you flatter me! I feel the same about opuss ☺

@naaviie that's partly why I'm on opuss

@lauraessex me too! πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

@naaviie πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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