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I once felt alone,
A shallow, yet,
Deep wound,
On a darkened silhouette,
Fading to grey,
From black with a
lost will to stay,
But I kept swimming,
Against the tide,
Perhaps a complex,
Or perhaps my pride,
All I know,
Is now deep inside,
There is a special spot,
Where you reside.

[woo! For 600th post!]

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (18)

Beautiful! Really love this..πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’πŸ‘πŸ‘

@softwhispers - thank you, it's straight from my reawakened heart πŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨

Awww...got your man then? πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ‘

@leelee101 - I do indeed, sir, I did it and didn't chicken out! 😍

@naaviie aww, thrilled for you..πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜πŸ’“

@softwhispers πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

Congrats on the big 600 and the new man! πŸ˜‰

Oooo someone's got under your skin πŸ‘ congrats on the 600th post πŸ’πŸ˜˜

@Jamtots @sjw hehehe thank you πŸ’šπŸ˜πŸ˜˜βœ¨

@naaviie I'm so pleased for you! What did we all say about going for it?!? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜

@Irrational_Kimmi - I know, and all that persuasive nagging was a great help. Turns out we were both scared but once I said something everything just... Made sense 😍

@naaviie yay!!! I'm genuinely full of joy about this, you deserve it 😍😘😍❀

@Irrational_Kimmi ☺☺☺ it is rather great. πŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨

@naaviie uh oh I sense a series of mushy love poems heading Opuss' way!!!

@Irrational_Kimmi - oh no, it's not love yet πŸ˜‰

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΈπŸΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ love this!!!!!

😘

@minxyMolly β˜Ίβ˜ΊπŸ’šπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜βœ¨

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