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Judgement

I don't care about your face,
It doesn't matter, it's not my place,
All our hearts, minds and skin,
All different but the same within,
I see your eyes, unique and bright,
Though some narrow to give me fright,
I have made my fair share of judgement,
It's only natural to say, I suppose,
A witch is one with a hooked nose,
The poor are stupid and ugly,
Blondes are supposed to be bubbly,
Obese kids live on fast food,
Teenagers are all in the "hood",
It's not true,
most judgements are lies,
A simple pattern's guise!

So it helps make quick sense of the world,
The one we are thrown in to, hurled,
But that is no excuse,
As it might end in upset or abuse,
Instead, I think, take your time,
See how they laugh, work or rhyme,
We are all human, all friends, really we are,
All dreaming and living in minds not so far.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Spot on! Great piece πŸ˜„πŸ‘

@natalee just another rant in my head 😜 thanks sweetie 😘

Great write hunπŸ‘πŸ‘

@misslittleDHP πŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨β˜Ί

Great write!

@Nom 😘🐸

Love this β€πŸ’“β€

@naaviie one day I will post a real picture here....just to prove I'm not a frog

@sjw πŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨ and 😘🍸🎈 for RP too!

@Nom - noooo don't shatter my dreams! 😜

Have you ever read Guns, Germs and Steel? It's long and dry, and the furthest thing in the world from poetry, but wonderful for explaining the shared humanity of us all.

@VikingHorn sounds thrilling πŸ˜‰

@Nom Depends on your tolerance for academic reading. If you're a history or sociology geek, you'll love it; otherwise you'll think it's only for pretentious twats who want to sound intellectual at parties. Guess who's a geek? πŸ‘ˆ :D

@naaviie Never a truer word spoken! @VikingHorn (ooooh, and guess who's now gonna read that!! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜„).

@VikingHorn I'm a history geek (part time) so I might give it a go!

@MrsS @Nom It's by Jared Diamond.

@VikingHorn thanks

Naaviie what is the animal in my profile?

Berry

Very well written! I live the line patterns guise. That's brilliant!βœ¨πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘βœ¨

@VikingHorn @Nom @MrsS - I couldn't get through it, too much long-wordy-waffle with out making proper points... But then I'm most certainly not history or English inclined.

@Nom - a mini marmoset?

@ckahn thank you very much - appreciated πŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨

@naaviie not a lemur?@VikingHorn

@Nom - no, too small, different skull shape

Great @VikingHorn thanks for that πŸ˜‰β˜Ί

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