Moving On

naaviie • 976 followers

This is it,
I cannot stay,
Time to pack me up,
Lock the past away,
Pass me that cotton wool,
Wrap up my mind,
Feel the highway's pull,
Remind me how I was blind,

Time to walk out of this trap,
With this big roll of bubble wrap,
Now prepared for life,
And other loves,
Now that of you,
I am free,
So get out the tape
and help me,
Just seal off this last one,
The cardboard box with my heart,
Now old, tired, and done.

#breakup #emotional-journey #household #rhyme #self-discovery

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Comments & Feedback (18)

Jul 14, 2012 at 8:28 AM

@Bluegerbil I was just gunna tag you but you already found it! Speedy or what

Jul 14, 2012 at 8:29 AM

@naaviie :) I really like this!

Jul 14, 2012 at 8:30 AM

@Bluegerbil thanks! I'm not feeling on top form, so that's why this is pretty rubbish 😜

Jul 14, 2012 at 8:35 AM

It's not rubbish. Love the simplicity of it. 💚💚😊

Jul 14, 2012 at 8:52 AM

Love this❤❤❤❤❤

Jul 14, 2012 at 9:06 AM

@eddie12309 @misslittleDHP too kind 😘😘

Jul 14, 2012 at 1:37 PM

Love it not rubbish at all 💗 you ok hun? X

Jul 14, 2012 at 1:43 PM

@sjw thank you! I'm just having one of those days! Will be fine, thanks for asking 😊

Jul 14, 2012 at 2:17 PM

@naaviie big hugs xx

Jul 14, 2012 at 4:07 PM

@sjw thankies 💚😘✨

Jul 14, 2012 at 4:22 PM

I think it'd good too😊👍

Jul 14, 2012 at 4:25 PM

Aww love it 💗💗 hope your ok mwah 😘😘 xoxo

Jul 14, 2012 at 4:27 PM

@Stablish @minxyMolly - thank you both, really too kind! 😘😘

Jul 14, 2012 at 10:54 PM

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Jul 14, 2012 at 10:56 PM

@cookiekitty45 oh thank you very much! 😘✨

Jul 15, 2012 at 1:34 AM

Naaviie, this is truly brilliant 😔💔

Jul 15, 2012 at 1:45 AM

@Fly10 - thank you! 😘😘 and for all the reading, much appreciate it 💚

Jul 15, 2012 at 1:48 AM

Pleasure-wouldn't have wanted to miss any of it😉😌😘

Jul 15, 2012 at 1:49 AM

@Fly10 awe, too sweet, I've missed that contented smilie of yours haha 😜

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