Heart thumping deep inside my chest,
Droplets of sweat trickling down my face creating tiny puddles of anxiety,
I take one hard look at the never ending track that awaits my foot steps,
I wait...wait for the piercing gun shot that threatens my feet to run,
Ready,
Set,
Go!
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This is really good :) I like the anticipation you get when you read it but I think it should be longer :3 constructive Criticism
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