Ok. Hopefully you guys have been having as much fun reading Stan, as I have had writing it. Exploring the darker side of my imagination has been an exciting event. I know...I don't get out much.
But be warned. The next chapter, chapter 10 is going to bloody. I warn you now, as I know there are people on this site well under 18, and to be honest, you naughty buggers, you really shouldn't be reading chapter 10.
I'm not doing it to shock, or disgust. I am doing it as Stan is about to reveal another piece of his game, and in order to do this, it's gonna be gory. I am actually researching medical papers to see if it is even possible.
If you decide not to read chapter 10 fair enough. I won't hold it against you. If you like I can email you a much less gory plot line for the chapter so you can still read the following parts without missing part of the plot.
Once again, you have been warned. I really don't know if I'm going to be able to pull this off so Chapter 10 PROBABLY won't be up for a couple of days.
Of course I welcome any feedback regardless if it good or bad. If you feel it's slightly over the top, that's fine. I can always tweak it. If you feel it's unneeded that's cool, I can always rewrite. But I might need some help...
Thanks guys. Your support while writing this has been great, and without each and everyone of you I would never have written chapter one. I tip my hat to you all, and HOPE I am making the right discussion.
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@glensaggs lol!! Well according to the interweb, my idea IS possible...don't ask what sites I had to look at to find it out tho!
@becominghuman wait no more. Got bored at work and ran with what I had researched. I was only researching if it was medically possible, so hopefully it's all sound. @glensaggs not sure if it's gory enough for you tho bud! Lol!!
@puffy1980 sweet!! Due to the fact you have had to research this, I think this is going to be stan's best chapter
@becominghuman I don't know about that. I personally prefer chapter four, but feedback is always welcome!!
To tell u frankly it is the first time i read this kind of story. I feel uneasy but i mudt admit u got an imagination beyond imagination !!!!! Excellent though i am scared by your description . Amazing !!
@salettesiao I held back on chapter 10 in the end. It's gory, but not to the extreme. Gonna save that for a later date! Have bounced a few ideas off a couple of people, and i think its actually starting to grow as a story now. Cool new AVI by the way, :)
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