I wish I could see
What people see seeing me,
And change if need be.
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Comments & Feedback (7)
I very much doubt there is anything in yourself that needs changing. I found that being yourself without being extreme is just fine. Other than that, it's the others that need to adjust their attitude.
I won't chance for everyone. They can go get f*cked if they want to see anything different in me. :)
@celtbud @mirabahjojabo @Bethibella I completely agree with all of you, but I thought it'd be interesting to write something from a different point of view. But yes, I hope there are few people who actually think this way!
@quackoquack it's always good to explore other points of view and you have done a good job in conveying it!
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