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Fighting Destiny ( Chapter 4)

Feedback guys ?? Please.!!

Once at school we got on the bus, I sat next to Maddy in the middle.
Phoebe Miller, Rebecca Jones, Megan Davies and Carly Foster where sat at the back with all their admires sitting as close as they could, pathetic. I hated, no despised Phoebe, she has made my life hell here. The taunts and jokes made me feel unimportant when weirdly I always felt in control. Any way they are the bullies, and they where calling their pray.
"Hey, Charlie come sit by me," her voice was bright.
Charlie had turned up late,
Charlie Manning, was beautiful, seriously. He was tall and obviously worked out, he had floppy chocolate hair that waved a little and yellow eyes. Phoebe and co. fancy him like crazy. As he walked up the middle towards them he replied " ok,".
I heard that voice, and took in my breath, sharply. "yes it's me, surprised" in my head he was laughing. " nod if you can hear me" I challenged. He nodded, then smirked.

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The writing styles seems good but the first three chapters were a little short and didn't give you time to get into the story seems to be getting better though!x (could you please give me some feedback on my story, 'Life's A Dream So Just Keep On Sleeping' not really sure on how it's going it's my first story on here so..) :)

@emmzstar99 thanks and yeh I will โค๐Ÿ˜œโœŒ

Thanks x

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