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Eclipse

He shone in my blackest sky
Like the moon in the pit of night
A beacon in my darkest day
I never thought he'd take it away

Pulling me like the tide
My moon settled into my life
Turning me he made me roll
He filled me up making me whole

He took over the sky above
He took away all of my love
He moved on and created an eclipse
He blocked out the sun's existence

To the sun I'd gotten negligent
No light, love and nourishment
In the dark I faded into the gloom
Wilted and lost to the distant moon

redfae

@redfae

A redhead writer trying to get my novel published. I enjoy writing YA Paranormal Romances and so far had a short story and article published. I maintain my blog and website at www.alisonaldridge.co.nr

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Excellent Ally ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@leelee101 Thank you. First day back at work after a nice long break today :(

@redfae don't remind me hun... ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

@leelee101 it turned out not so bad :)

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