Please accept me, don't look away, my appearance causes eyes to stray.
Can't I be thinner, black underlines my eyes, my very soul cries as it dies.
Why can't I be beautiful, their standards I can't meet, through my ribs my skin retreats.
Please be honest, answer me true, I really could lose more, you don't have a clue.
I want to be accepted, I can be much better than that, please tell me true, am I really that fat?
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Started writing poetry officially in 1991, enjoy reading Edgar Allen Poe, reading and dissecting the Holy Bible, and listening to beautiful/inspiring people. Age has no bearing on creativity. Some of the most beautiful things come from those of much lesser age and life experiences. So listen to those young people!
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