I feel blind, engulfed by darkness and isolation. The only thing I can feel is the cracked concrete ground. My senses are slow, and my movements haphazard.
The only sense I can work is smell. Slowly, I siphon the petrichor from my surroundings, forcing my nose to tingle. And as I'm looming through the silence, I suddenly see two bright red eyes, illuminating my own drowsing ones in their reflection.
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This is real scary I screamed hushed because it was late "strawberries" And started eating my strawberry pj bottoms Scary is it not?.
Terrified, I remembered our break up. I had come home and Was planning to break up with him. I opened the door and there he was - on his knee with a ring. And all our families and friends were there.
That morning when I was eating breakfast I wondered what the shadow was I knew I'd find out soon. That night I got a letter saying do not fear the shadows signed mr mystery.
It was in the 1800 times wen it was a house theat was in vestervik. That's very old that a old man lived I and he's name was Freddy Kruger, he kills a lot of pals in the dreams .
The salty water gently laps at the shore, silently beckoning the tiny grains to follow. As the sun melts down the horizon, birds swoop playfully above.
In the graveyard otherwise known as a school, he stares at his prey. The children scream and run into the darkness and gloom of this dull May Day.
If you were there, but why would you be, the police need evidence... It was a cold grey morning and it was still dark outside but someone was up walking solemnly round the first floor of the house.
I woke up in a island there was nothing around me I look about there was death above me..
I just realised a big mistake saying smell was the only working sense! Haha, I'm going to blame the fact I wrote it at 1am.
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