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Lot one- seven- O

170 is a special number to me

Lot one- seven- O
It was the number of my old auction bought flat
It had a lot going for it before
I left it all for that prat

Bought on the 3rd of December
Sold to Mr G and Miss D
Happier times I remember
For the life we'd planned to lead

Then I got confused
Bored some may say
But I ended up used
And we'd parted forever and day

I played my part
But you weren't innocent in this charade
I tried to resist with all my heart
But the time was up on this facade

You'd become so lazy
I wanted out
Things got a little hazy
Then you knocked me out

The final straw
The one that broke the donkeys back
My feelings and emotions left out raw
You didn't bat an eyelid in giving me a crack

But life has moved on
I made a choice flat or patch
Lot one seven O has been and gone
Time for this butterfly to finally hatch

sara_lou

@sara_lou

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Good stuff. Now you've moved on I look forward to more from you, butterfly πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Very brave of you to write this. I'm glad the butterfly spread its wings πŸ˜”πŸ‘πŸ’š

@RichWithey thanks Hun :) life is much better now especially as I'm no ones doormat now :) xx

@leelee101 thank you kind sir for the RP. This butterfly is ready to spread her wings πŸ’œπŸ˜˜

@eddie12309 thank you for the RP. It finally felt like the right time to try and gain closure on 9 months of hell. πŸ˜˜πŸ’œ

@sara_lou πŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’œπŸ’š Hope you find somewhere lovely to spread your wings πŸ πŸ’š

I'm so glad you were strong enough to move on in your life my sweet...a great write tooπŸ’—πŸ’šπŸ’—πŸ’š

@MrsS thank you sure I will eventually just gonna take my time find the me I used to love πŸ˜ŠπŸ’œ

@misslittleDHP thank you onwards and upwards πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜πŸ’œ

What a strong write - brilliant πŸ’šβ€πŸ’œπŸ’™

@naaviie thanks Hun πŸ’œ

@naaviie thanks for RPing hun πŸ’œ

No worries 😘

Wonderful words from a strong butterfly! I hope life treats you more kindly now πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

@Irrational_Kimmi thanks for the RP Hun I'm looking forward to the future πŸ’œπŸ’œ

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