Haiku

First line is 5 syllables, second is 7 syllables, third is 5 syllables

^^ what @were said. I like the idea! 👍❤

@paintingskies it's not a haiku if you don't do it that way

@were ikik I was trying to make it an ironic haiku, sort of mixed and matched, I'm aware that its not technically a haiku.

But I'm glad you noticed. I was hoping someone would.

And just an interesting fact to note, a haiku doesn't necessarily have to be built of 5 7 5, as the poems are traditional Japanese ones; the Japanese rules state that it has to be built of seventeen syllables, that's a must follow rule. However, in Japan letters such as 'n' count as there own separate syllable, therefore a line which we would class as consisting of four syllables would actually be five. The act is that as haikus adapt in western countries many people feel as if there are plenty rules to stick to without ruining the traditional haiku. So forth, people tend to criticise other haikus for a mistake. When they are in fact perfectly acceptable. So, even though my haiku doesn't follow the traditional line of the norm, adaptations in today's world tend to only follow one rule, three lines and seventeen syllables. Sorry for the lecture, but I'm in the midst of studying for poetry analysation:L

@paintingskies thanks:3, and for the wonderful '💛'

Anytime! 😊 And that's interesting stuff.

@shaheenashapeenur wow I didn't know that! Thanks, that's pretty cool!

@were np, sorry for rambling though, I tend to when I'm engrossed in poetry. Thanks for the brilliant repost and '💛' ☺😘

The second half of that post was for @paintingskies, my phone goes crazy sometimes :3 but thanks to both of you:D. I'm just exhausted because I have piles of schoolwork 😉☕