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I Did Try....

So hard Every Day
Every night
I was so dedicated to You and to make You Happy
What Did I go wrong?
I tried so hard....
To become What You wanted
Dress the way You liked
Not talk to much
Use the proper language
Respekt You
All I asked for was some love
I tried so hard to change myself to please You
All I Ever Did was to Try to please You
All I asked for was love
I tried so hard, I Did lose myself one Day
That girl is no more
Then You left
You Said love was mot enough
I still Try to find myself
Im still Looking
Cant find that girl

simplystylish

@simplystylish

Life , it has been kicking Me around for à while,,,, Trying to start Life over .... What do I need to bring???

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Very good! And very impressive bearing in mind English isn't even your first language! Well done :-)

Oh hun Im blushing now!! Glad You like it it keeps Me going!!!xoxo

@simplystylish you gotta keep going! Your very talented :-))

😍awww sweetie💋

@simplystylish now your making me blush! ;-)

Just shows you shouldn't change yourself for anyone!

@simplystylish hey,check out my Scandinavian delight poem!

@naaviie true oh so true, But love is blind and I was stupid

@simplystylish far too easy to do, all gotta make that mistake at least once

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