Your words touch My soul so hard
Many Times' it feels like Your words are about My Life
How Can You know My pain so Well
Your poems leave Me breathless at times
Your words take the edge if My pain
My spirit Can fly free
Like two peas in a pod
We fit together
Id like to give You something back
But My words feel so worthless
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Life , it has been kicking Me around for à while,,,, Trying to start Life over .... What do I need to bring???
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@simplystylish....awww I truly am touched I really am...it makes me so very happy that my words reach people...just knowing that is enough for me...I humbly THANKYOU for this beautiful poem...brought a lump to my throat...sooooo kind of you my darling mwah mwah! Xxx
@sjw you too my sweet...I'm just so chuffed that peeps enjoy my stuff on many levels...I hid it away for years thinking it was just me who thought I could write lol...thanks sweetie x
Hi everybody English is not My First language But I feel à freedom to write and so Many of You have given Me positive feedback misslittleDHP Your poems release much of My own unexpressed pain i love You Honey
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