K isses turned to ice but their imprint won't go
E very atom of my being yearns for your touch
N ever imagined that I'd miss you so much.....
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Ooo I likey. 💔 Just a thought Missy™ (had to do it!) ravaged by the guilt, instead of hurt? Just a thought. Great write hunny 👍❤😘
This is just divine -sad; but oh-so-yummy. I couldn't help but wonder if you substitute hurt for spilt on the sentence that starts with broken -may rhyme better? ☺💐😘💗✨
@leelee101 @yikici lol you both don't like hurt 😂 thanks for the suggestions I've gone with guilt and edited a bit, is it better? 😘😘
@sjw haha that's from Florida outside the Lego shop! It's Mr Potato Head from Toy Story. Have you seen the outtakes on YouTube? Crack me up... There's a whole section with him and his missus, she's packing him off on a trip... pmsl every time! 👍❤😘
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