My love?
You may have read my earlier posts about my love, if not a brief summary: I was desperately in love with a girl and she broke my heart.
I thought I got over her but now I'm not so sure.
She's left the school and I feel very sad.
I wish I could see her face one more time,
I loved her so much.
Sorry about pouring out my heart here but I've nobody to talk to.
Excuse me while I cry.
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A lover of animals / not a bad poet/I'm not going to say my age but I'm under 18/I'm the kinda guy that tries to keep people happy but doesn't have much friends myself. Oh yeah and I'm Irish
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Comments & Feedback (18)
Try to move on. If she broke your heart, then she's probably not worth it. You'll find someone even better. However, if you truly think she's worth it, don't give up. Seek her out and show her how much she means to you. Sorry, that sounded like some cheesy speech from a love story! 😓 😳
It's quite cliche, but if you love something, let it go. If it's meant to be yours it'll come back. If it doesn't, it wasn't meant to be x
You guys are the best, @mpallister24 thank you, @meggie2012 I tried to show her, but she told me to go away and that she hates my guts, your comment means a LOT though, @xGx your right it wasn't ment to be , you's are all the best, I only feel content on opuss thanks to you.
Aw, thank you! I'm really sorry it didn't work out... 😡 Please don't take offence, but she doesn't seem
Ehh..yeah. I commented, then revised it and deleted it. I didn't have time to post a different comment, so here it is; thank you! And if she does things like that to you, then she doesn't deserve you! 😡😡😡
Things will get better! I know it! Right now you may feel sad and lonely, but I'll let you in on a little secret. Most people don't even know what it feels like to be in love. I mean I've never known what it's like to be in love with someone, so you're much luckier than I am. Just keep your head up. It's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.
@speed577 yeah...it spelt something wrong so I deleted it... It was: if your still not over her, she's not worth it. Soon enough you'll move on and forget her xx
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