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THE GIRL WHO IS ALLOWED A HUSBAND AT 17.

Part nine - so cute!! Warning now: maybe mushy!!
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'Close your eyes now, Hun, I gotcha,' josh assured me, I did as asked - did 'hun' not mean anything in boy world?
As soon as we got to my secret surprise - what's a surprise that isn't a secret?
Tears of joy welled up in my eyes,'this-this is so ro-romantic!' I cried -literally! There was a little red and white checked blanket down and a few candles lit, also on the blanket was a brown woven basket...a midnight picnic on the beach - with candles!
We got settled down on the blanket, digging in to bread, butter, jam, cheese, ham and champagne/shlล“r.
'Hey, Josh?' I smiled after finishing my baguette,
'Yeas...' He answered with his mouth full, unsure of my next sentence...I was unsure of it too.
So many things I could say, and ten words and three punctuation stick in my head...

'Josh, I love you. Will you go out with me? I whispered, his face lit up and a smile grew on his face, we leaned it to each other.
crash! we crashed noses and fell apart laughing,
'Second time lucky!' He grinned, soon we were kissing.

When we came back to the hotel I realised something, I was - as some people say 'lost in the moment.'

'Josh, you never did answer my question...' I lingered about the last words, sat on the bed he looked deep into my eyes,
'That's because I thought it was obvious.' He answered simply, again, we went into a deep kiss -blah blah blah (and maybe a bit more....!)

I took it that we were dating (best boyfriend ever!!)
I can't wait until morning!

tattyteddy

@tattyteddy

I'm going to write till I die. I'll write stories, music, poetry and I guarantee that I will post half of it on here. Keep a look out! Xx

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@tattyteddy AWESOME

@tattyteddy thanks it's amazing!! โค Let me know when the next part's out!! Xx

@Tweedledee @UnionJg thanks!! Ill let ya know, yeah xx

What should I do for the next part? I have a feeling it's going to be a long one!!

@tattyteddy ooo yeah! Something would happen like they come for them or she gets taken

Should not would

@Tweedledee yeah! And a little surprise before that as well!

@tattyteddy amazing chapter. Once u finish it u should get the two story's published!!!

@bettyluvy that means so much! Thank you xxx

@tattyteddy it's true tho!!!!

@UnionJg don't u think @tattyteddy should get this published!!!

@bettyluvy hahaha! It's okay, I believe you :D xxx I may do xx

@tattyteddy good!!! Then u can spread the love with every one!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜„

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