Well done everyone who participated in #youngwritershousehold, I have got winners!
First of all though, id love to say 'thankyou' for everyone who took part. Sorry if I didn't see yours, it would be either because you didn't tag me or # youngwritershousehold
@platypus - fly away
Excellent description, the rhyming was great, keep on going - practice makes perfect!
@awesomeannie - butterfly
Different, great imagination, description was fab, made me want more, however you could add more descriptive writing :)
@hafy - butterfly butterfly
Imaginative, great, funny and a perfect comedy poem ( for me anyway!)
CONGRATULATIONS YOU ARE THIRD!
@littleone - flying boy
Wonderful piece of descriptive writing also its unique and no-one else used the other words, apart from you!
CONGRATULATIONS - JOINT THIRD!
@mpalister - butterfly
I can tell you work and effort went into this, it was stunning and I loved the dotted rhyming words!
CONGRATULATIONS YOU ARE SECOND!!
@georgiastar - butterfly
Great description
Perfect rhymes
Just like a butterfly should be!
Well done and CONGRATULATIONS YOU ARE FIRST
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@tattyteddy
I'm going to write till I die. I'll write stories, music, poetry and I guarantee that I will post half of it on here. Keep a look out! Xx
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