Streaming through my window panes,
Uplifting spirits, awakening my mind,
New light guiding us in the direction of spring,
Life seems so much more manageable,
Igniting dreams warming my heart,
Glowing rays of hope,
Heeling sad minds, in the day,
Till the cool of the night becomes.
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This is was my first, and thus far only, attempt at writing a sonnet. The sun hides its face from the winter dance As the sleeping sprites of cold fall to earth.
On the day after tomorrow,. The world will be peaceful void of sorrow,. Life moves on as time passes by,. Each day will get easier your tears will dry,. Trees that are barren will sprout new buds,.
@sarahgamal @leelee101 thank you I really struggled with this and as I got to the end I have had another thought on this acrostic so will hopefully post another tomorrow.
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