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A Perfect, Pathetic Fallacy

It felt scripted. As though I was a character in a story where the audience understood everything that I didn't. As though I went through the entire day before I realised where I actually was.

It started a beautiful day, the sky blue, sun shining down on the delicate flowers. Everyone gathered dressed in their best, colour co-ordinated, looking sharp. Laughter and memories filled the clouds overhead.

As the hearse pulled up to the house, the sky opened with a downpour of tears, hitting the solemn faces. The umbrellas went up as the family were escorted to the limousines. Not a soul spoke.

The journey felt long. The traffic moderate, with drivers desperately avoiding the build up caused by respect. No one quite grasped where they were going, or why.

Hearts poured out emotion all around, people beginning to realise what was going on. Did I? I'm not sure. I think I was still sitting there, as though watching from another place. It couldn't be real, it was too quick? So unexpected? That's when I began to realise.

The service was beautiful, and so began the day for what it was. Not a day of mourning a life lost, but a day of celebrating the life had, and the possibility of what may.

So why am I telling you this? To make sure you make the most of life. Surround yourself by your close ones and tell them you love them. Chances are, they already know, but ask yourself, have you told them? If you haven't, is it worth the risk not to? I would suggest not.

tgriffiths42

@tgriffiths42

A born creative; I love art in all forms. Life is about the opportunities that you take, not the ones that you missed.

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Sorry for your loss Tom, but thank you for sharing. Advice we should all take to heart.

What wonderful

Godam stupid send button!! That's like 6 times it's done it!!! Anyway as I was saying before rudely being cut off, what wonderful advice, and I'm sorry for your loss

@TommyVice @meganelisabeth thank you both, it's a new day, and life must go on, so cherish what you have while you can :-)

@tgriffiths42 you probably heard it enough times, but I am truly sorry for your loss! And it's so beautifully written, that is why I'll hit like! - head up and cherish every moment! ------> I'm sending you hugs!!!

@sark thank you very much, it is very greatly appreciated :-) and I think I needed that hug!

Its great that you were able to take such a positive message from this situation. Thanks for sharing

@shanwan sometimes you have to look deeper to find the rainbow in the storm, but if you don't search for it, you'll only ever see the dark clouds. Thanks for your support :-)

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