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Breathless

Aaaaak...wheeze...eeeerk....aaaaaarg...gasp....eeerk...hhhhhh..... (death)

wolfie

@wolfie

The Octoberman. All I need is a bottle of Talisker, a keyboard and you. Facebook: Nikarkham www.nikarkham.co.uk

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@naaviie sorry. Some idiot was going to do it, so I thought it might as well be THIS idiot

πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I said original!! Ah well, congrats on first entry πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

Nic, where was your profile pic taken? Wasn't France was it?

I love the raw emotion of this piece. One of your best works for sure 😜

πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ well u stayed on topicπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@Nom thanks :-) I guess I asked for that

@wolfie :)

Was just outside of Bangkok! Perhaps I should visit wherever it is in France?

@naaviie just reminded me of the Dordogne - there were sunflowers everywhere there. We're you holidaying near Bangkok then?

I wish!! Haven't been able to travel this summer do was reminiscing about last years adventure πŸŒ»πŸ’š

πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I'll have whatever your on..

I never would have guessed how humorous and enjoyable I would find your death! πŸ˜±πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@VikingHorn 😲

πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ OK, that's certainly one direction to go with itβœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨

@VikingHorn your morbid!😱

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