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Paper-thin Skin

Warning: May cause distress, so don't read if you're in doubt.

Her bones tremble,
She's panning for strength deep amongst the weakness,
Begging her eyes to keep her alive;
As long as they can see, she will survive,
Paper-thin, her skin is pink-grey,
Seemingly dissolving at each reminder of the fact that she is existing.
She buries her head in those inch-thick arms,
With only a tuft of hair to cover the pain she shows on her face.
Hidden beneath the clutching of her body: her chest,
Translucent enough for everyone to see the fear glowing through,
Reminding her, and them...
Ticking, tocking, tensing, weakening,
Sliding, fading
There's not long left.
Life crushes, breath rushes
Out, ribs move rapidly at her side,
She doesn't want to be a spectacle or a showcase.
She doesn't want to feel any more special than she was before. She isn't.
She wants to

Feel

Normal

Agai--

Bethibella

@Bethibella

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This is so sadπŸ˜‚, but I hope she finds that bit of strength within herself to regain her dignity and confidence again!😍

Amazingly powerful...probably the most powerful and moving piece I have read on here. I salute you! :D

@michga well, it sort of turns out at the end that she died, but if she didn't that's what I would have hoped for too! @Dovahkiin Wow!! Thank you so much! That means a lot to me :)

@Bethibella ...I'm so sorry to here that! She had a great friend in you!πŸ˜‰πŸ’“

@michga oh it's not real, just inspired by cancer patients and one story in particular that I read about, a girl who had cystic fibrosis who wrote a blog and vlogged until she died, it was called 65redroses and her name was Eva. It touched me a lot.

@Bethibella ...Oh! I can see why!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰β€

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