Sean was the best swimmer in the land
And he loved sand
He was smitten
But by a shark he got bitten
And now his arse is in plaster
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Comments & Feedback (4)
Hunny you're just too late. 😢 But if you can take a little critique, that last line needed to rhyme with the first two I'm afraid. Sorry sweety 👍❤🌹
@leelee101 ah okay, I didn't know that ☺ I'll keep that in mind for when/if I write another one ☺👍 thanks lee
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