I wrote this about 3 years ago and ever since I've wanted to make it into a song. Unfortunately I am quite bad at doing so and so it remains a small poem ...
Save me from this life of misery,
Save me from this life of pain,
Wrap your arms around my body,
And protect me from the rain.
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Dim the lights,. Kiss me goodnight,. Hug my waist,. Don't leave like mist,. Tell me you love me,. Can't you see,. I'm all alone,. The only one home,. Don't leave yet,. Stay when the sun sets,.
Without you Who will notice When I fall again Into that black place Of loneliness and Self-loathing And fear of doing Anything outside My comfort zone.
Invincible Unstoppable I wish. Heart Unbreakable I wish. Tears Containable I wish. Scars Concealable I wish.
There are things that are better left unsaid Matters of the heart that only bring tears and pain I went I as far as thinking of you for a minute when in trying to keep you away.
I'm here. Do you not see me. I'm here. Do you not hear the desperation in every word left unspoken. I'm here. Do you not feel my presence; worn and anxious and praying for you to call my name.
I need inspiration In the form of a midnight lover I need hope In the form of a friend I need wisdom In the form of a sage Most of all I need love And someone who won't run away I want...
I never thought I'd miss you. I didn't think that I would care. But when I play our time together, in my mind. Of course I notice you're not there. I never thought I would learn. How to let myself go.
A sleepless night Without you by my side A lonely night Can't dry my tears, I tried.
This would make such a great song. I read it and instantly got a tune. Why not try expanding on it? I always do that and people say I write great songs
@AWriterGirl I have tried before ... But that was a while ago haha. So I might try again ☺. And thank you for the repost ☺☺
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