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A Baby I Never Meet

9 months ago I got the news,
You give me a reason to give up the booze.
You were only a little un-developed foetus,
But already I couldn't wait till you would meet us.
I can picture your pretty face,
You'd be so beautiful no one could replace.
You'd have your mothers' eyes and perfect complexion,
And none of my imperfection.
At first I was a little scared,
That when it came to the other dads I couldn't be compared.

As time went on I realised I am blessed,
To receive a gift of the highest celeste.
The doctor announced that your health grew weak,
You might not make it till the end of the week.
You didn't even get a chance at life,
That thought cuts through me like a knife.
Now your up there high in the sky,
However I can't determine the reason why?

Bronwyn_morrison

@Bronwyn_morrison

Hey, I'm 15 and I like to write :)

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Comments & Feedback (26)

Very sad and relatable to many.

Sad but true :( @eddie12309

Heartbreaking and relatable my sweet...sending hugs ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

Thank you :) @misslittleDHP

Sad stuff ๐Ÿ’”๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

Thanks @leelee101

Very beautifully written, hope it's not from experience ๐Ÿ™

Thank you, no not from my experience but someone I know sadly :( @onedirection19

@Bronwyn_morrison I'm sorry to hear that, I send my condolences

Thank you, it's greatly appreciated @onedirection19

@Bronwyn_morrison this is amazing.

Aww really? Thank you so much :) @Alys124

Well done bronda! So sweet :) hahaha..... Addicted ;)@Bronwyn_morrison

Haha thanks! Yeah I really am! :) lol but you are too! @AJBrown

@Bronwyn_morrison really this really touched my heart. I can really relate to this poem. You are a true writer.

@Bronwyn_morrison no arguments there :D check out big blue riding hood for me, it took me ages!

@Bronwyn_morrison I salute you! ๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ™Œ

Aw thank you so much, I'm glad I can write something people can relate to because for me that's what writings all about :) @Alys124

Okay will do ;) @AJBrown

@Bronwyn_morrison me too. You can pinpoint exactly ehat everything means to me about writing - bot many people can do that

Aw thank you so much, means so much when people wrote such nice comments @Alys124

So sad ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜˜๐ŸŒน

Awww thanks @musicalmissy

@Bronwyn_morrison your welcome I hope whoever experiences this manages to live on and lead a good life. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜˜๐ŸŒน

I'm sure they appreciate it :) @musicalmissy

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