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Black

The lack of colour, the absence of light

Devoid of pigment, returns to black

Absorbs all that approaches and soaks up warmth

Feeds on energy of others and gives little back

It doesn't mix well, too strong for most

Polluting the brightest that get in its way

Only pure white stands a chance

To balances the scales and to turn it to grey

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Comments & Feedback (16)

Brilliant 👏👏💚

I like this. 😃👍👏👏

@Weirdwolf thank you.. I love the whole scales of good/evil black/white metaphor and the logic behind it.. I'm not that into fantasy but Dragonlance Chronicles are ficking brilliant at conveying it and everything in between in a pulp story 👍

@Burrfoot I believe darkness is light turned inside out. One and the same.

@Weirdwolf exactly 👍 two sides of one coin and one cannot exist without the other.. I love that thought

@Burrfoot exactly, polar opposites of the same piece. Like day and night, good and evil, love and hate, pain and pleasure.

@Weirdwolf over whatever period of time we may pick to measure, one will out balance the other.. But then the scales will redress.. The other part of this that I find fascinating is that evil will always implode and destroy itself

@Burrfoot closely chased by Good biting on its tail. The Ouroboros

@Weirdwolf and good will be corrupted and think it is soo pure it can do no wrong.. So therefore anything it does is good..

@Burrfoot makes a lot of sense. But are these things not concepts? Accepted facts, man made? O

@Weirdwolf how do you mean?

@Burrfoot in the respect of emotions, good and evil, right and wrong. Are these 'concepts' of human creation? I often wonder about labels, can they change and adapt to a broader understanding or are they cemented as fact?

@Weirdwolf ahh I think it's our labels for concepts.. But with good reason as intelligent life.. An animal may carry out acts that if a human did it would be called 'evil'. The animal cannot be rational but we can. Good/Evil is a label for concepts that are as tangible as up/down

@Burrfoot i suppose on way of visualising it is with a wheel. The central pin being chaos, the spokes representing the path of opposites, the northern most point being up, let's say, the southernmost being down, easer and west, left and right, and these spokes go in every direction and every representation, dark, light, right, wrong. I everything has its equal and exact opposite, but is essentially the same spoke, just different end if the perspective.

@Burrfoot sorry about all the mistakes in the above. Silly spell checker thing!!

@Weirdwolf love it 👍

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