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Burnt

Pandemonium around me
In the flashing lights
Screams fill the air
While my loved one fights

Flames rip through the roof
Taking memories and life
Melted treasures and charred remains
Heart pierced like butter by hot knife

Not long till Christmas
I thought we'd have one never to forget
I struck a match to light our way
A blaze to burn our debt

They weren't supposed to be here
A weekend with her mum
Now I have lost everything
A lifetime's torment to lament on what I've done

Burrfoot

@Burrfoot

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Oh that's sad mate 😒

@leelee101 πŸ˜’ indeed tt

Whoa! That's heavy. It can be a sad lifeπŸ’—πŸŒ·πŸ’—

This reminds me of the family that was wiped out recently. Sad write 😞

@ckahn @eddie12309 it's a sad fact of society that this happens to some degree or variation so often πŸ˜’

A sad, emotive write...felt the desperation ....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”

@Burrfoot hey im

@Burrfoot very behind so i was woundering if u could rp one of my poems?

@misslittleDHP πŸ‘πŸ’ͺ thanks huggy

So sad 😒 πŸ‘

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