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Wall Comes A Tumbling Down

Ok so maybe it's time
For another fresh start.
Sign upon the dotted line
No more broken heart.

More experienced, a little older
Defences up and tall.
Found a voice grew a little bolder
Brick by brick I built my wall.

You arrived and changed my mind
Reminded me what's at stake.
Beautiful, gentle and always kind
Love to give yet rarely take.

So the bricks are tumbling down
I am exposed to you.
Willing once more to swim or drown
My love for you is true.

Burrfoot

@Burrfoot

Getting there, one step at a time

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Aww that's lovely πŸ’“πŸ’—β€πŸ˜˜

@minxyMolly thanks 😊 sometimes better to leave a bit of wall though... Just high enough is squash the feckers if they destroy it 😜

@Burrfoot can you dub it the fecker destroyer?!? πŸ˜œπŸ˜„πŸ˜˜

Superb πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

@leelee101 thanks muchness 😊

I'm loving this muchlyπŸ’šβ€πŸ’—

@leelee101 walls need knocking down in my experience m8 to avoid feeling imprisoned with life. Good luck!πŸ‘

This is beautiful love it x

Wonderful!!! :)

@sjw @hiddenartist372 aww makes me all warm inside 😊 ty

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