You think that was an argument we had last night?
That was me laughing at your verbal shite.
As I said before you are a spoilt brat
You've proved me right ya silly wee twat
I wrote my poem because I care
You pretended you cut, for some stupid dare?
Open you're eyes boy and you will see
Your pathetic attempts to rile were not funny
I let you spout while you amused me
But deleted them all when my patience ran out, or didn't you see?
If you like dares my young little pup
Here's one, catch yourself on and grow up
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Very well said sir! It really does piss me right off when little immature people do stupid things that they think are oh so funny because they're stupid little friends told them it is, and they're just a stupid for believing they're stupid little friends who actually don't give a shit about them because if they did they wouldn't have told said person to do it in the 1st place! ๐ฒ rant over!
Well said๐๐๐๐๐ really pisses me off when people do stupid shit (or say they do) for attention or a laugh when it's a serious matter it's NOT funny to cut yourself actually it's a very serious matter in some ways and can affect the person doing it and those surrounding them!! ๐
@minxyMolly @Vicki indeed.. It was fairly obv he was a wind up, do I deleted it.. What really fkd me off was that he also commented on a young girl's post (she said she had once thought about self harm but realised it wasn't the way) by saying 'cutting wrists was the most ineffective way to commit suicide'.. While giggling behind his iPad with pals ๐ก
@Burrfoot what an idiot, it can actually be one of the most effective ways if you don't know what you're doing, but that's beside the point. To be fair they shouldn't even be on here, it states when you sign up to opuss that you have to be over 13, so why aren't these children being reported?!? Grrrrrrrrr ๐ก
@Vicki there's quite a few very mature and interesting young writers on here.. But then there's been 2 or 3 that are daft ๐
Hmm he's still an idiotic little boy! I agree there are some talented young writers but there are some very immature people who try and tell me at the age of 15 that they are adults not children!
@Vicki totally, I keep trying to ignore it and give them fools pardon, but the more it happens the bigger the urge to say something ๐๐ด
@Burrfoot ๐ just remember that they are little kids so don't be too harsh. If they want to step up and act more mature, then all will be forgiven right?
Just wanna put it out there I'm 16 and I wouldn't act that callous, its annoying because young people like that give the rest of my generation and younger a bad name
@minxyMolly every generation has them ๐ and I don't think there's many old'uns that tar all teens with same brush.. It's a cliche cos it's true.. We've all been there ๐
Helllllllo a bit of is what it is. Seriously didn't you do those things when you were younger. Don't tell people to grow up what happene to enjoy it while your young. And ye this is what we do in 'our generation' cuz there isn't much else to do. If he was being offensive then that's wrong. Just don't tell people to grow up.
@hafy I will tell you and any other immature mouthy rude child to grow up as I please and if that's what their actions deserve. Go and talk to your parents' friends like that and see what happens. Now seriously, beat it.. Stick to your own age group, I'm not interested in childish pish.
As I said don't fucking tell me to grow up or anything else okay I don't care about anything else you can call me a spoilt brat if you like but you were out of order there.
Your the bastard you don't know me. You can't say this shit. I've been through fucking hell I've HAD to grow up.
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