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Rudolph - Not Your Average Christmas Poem

This tale’s about Mister Rudolph,

Like Comet, he could not play golf,

Like Blitzen, he could not tango,

But he had had a nose like a red-ripe mango,

Shining, the light-emitting crimson globe,

As red as Santa’s regal robe,

Its truly celestial, radiant glow,

Set alight the sparkling snow,

The other reindeer became quite jealous,

And so utterly overzealous,

For Santa Claus’ attention,

That they maliciously dared to mention,

A truly sinister endeavour;

The silencing of Rudy Claus forever,

With a Comet-guided, ugly scheme,

And briefly it would plainly seem,

As he was a rotten sandwich destined for the bin,

Rather than a member of their reindeer kin,

It was awful that they would think a tick,

About such a treacherous trick,

Their despicable, evil plot,

Was to kidnap Rudy in his reindeer cot,

While he was soundly asleep,

They would not dare utter a peep,

They succeeded with the vile plan,

When they flung him in Santa’s sack, and,

Reaching the apex of the inhumane gauge,

They undid the ropes and pitched him into a cage,

“My fellow reindeer! Please let me out!”

Rudy pleaded with a desperate shout,

They rudely stuck out insulting tongues,

Then snorted and cackled at the top of their lungs,

And then Comet with a final hoot;

“Now that overweight Santa coot

Will choose me to lead the sleigh!”

But, the other reindeer didn’t say,

That they would even vaguely agree,

To such a conceited decree,

“No-ho-ho!” said an irate Vixen,

“I came up with all the tricks n’,

That Rudolph’s sack I was the one luggin’,

And I will proudly lead Santa’s flying toboggan!”

“Yeah, right!” said Cupid, “Tough luck!”

“I will be the lucky buck!

By Christmas morn I would have led,

Magnificently Saint Nick’s bobsled!”

“No way!” screamed an ireful Donner,

“Say that again and you’ll be a goner!”

“I found the cage!” growled a steaming Prancer,

“I stole the sack!” howled Dasher and Dancer,

As they squabbled, argued and fought,

Rudy whispered to himself, “From this my escape has bought!”

He came to his prison’s hefty lock,

Created from an iron block,

Frozen by the snowman named after Frost,

Rudy scraped the ice off with exhaust,

And to his distressing dismay,

The warring reindeer had the key!

As he groped at the bars in desperation,

In his heart exploded radiant animation,

His jolly mind disposed of the troubled thoughts,

Of the hurtful jokes of his ever-teasing cohorts,

His power had now begun to truly escape,

Now twisting the steel bars out of shape,

And soon his celestial light,

Had melted them quite out of sight!

And the other reindeer cried out in awe,

“I cannot believe that we never saw!

You’re the best reindeer that ever lived!

Us, will you ever forgive?”

“Yes!” small Rudy chirruped, “I will!”

“I excuse you all, but still!

“We need to get home, NOW, TONIGHT!”

Then his nose offered an obliging light,

And soon they were at the workshop at last,

And its lights Rudy’s honker greatly surpassed,

Then the elves and Santa himself they all met,

Who merrily asked if they were set,

To begin the international ride,

That brought joy to the morning of Yuletide,

They bolted up, beyond the eaves,

All laden with snow-dusted leaves,

And soon his abundance of toys,

Had been spread globally to little girls and boys,

That Christmas morn, while the elves danced a jolly jig,

The reindeer enjoyed a feast of festive pig.

CheAntoine

@CheAntoine

12 year old Caribbean boy with passion for literature. Read and enjoy! Like, comment, follow!

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What a story, nice work👏👏

Thanks again! Read your profile. How did you write 268 opusses???

It's been over half a year now, I've only just come back really, some people have thousands

😂😂 cracking tale! 👍

And I have 5! :)

@leelee101 Thanks, Lee!

Many more to come though I hope

@Stablish Yeah! :)

@Stablish So THAT'S what happens when people repost! :)

I wrote this poem for my parents last Christmas.

Yep, it's handy for getting stuff noticed. A good little system👍

Lovely poem! 😉👍💚 And Welcome to Opuss! 😊

Thanks for reposting, by the way.

How is Christmas where you live?

@MrsS Thank you!

Great poem👍 (Sorry, I just want to join in the chat)

@Blueblotts @CheAntoine Let's all chat lol, Christmas is looking good so far mate, had a little bit of snow already. How is it where you live?

@Blueblotts I'm just happy to have people comment! :)

@CheAntoine Remember to tag the person's name you are speaking to in each comment (unless it's in their own post) - or they won't know you've commented to them... 😉😘

Way different than where you are! I live in the Caribbean! Look for Trinidad on a map. No snow here! :)

Christmas is awesome, though. Wish I could go somewhere like England or New York at winter.

@MrsS Sorry!

@Stablish Way different than where you are! Look for Trinidad on a map. It's in the Caribbean!

Yeah, it is a great time of year, hopefully one day you get to go. I would love to go to the Caribbean, I've not been anywhere hot in years

Been to Florida, New York, and a bunch of Caribbean. Went on a cruise 3 years ago. You want the heat, I want the cold!

The grass is always greener as they say

Yep! Where do you live, anyway?

England

Some of my friends live in Leeds.

I live further down south than that, I will catch you later mate, it's well past my bed time lol

Bye!

Love this 👏❤

@CheAntoine I really want to go to Trinidad. I met a missionary from there and he spoke so fondly of the place😊 It sounded really beautiful.

@Stablish Not that I've been asked, but I can't wait for Christmas. It's only 19 sleeps away, y'know!!!!

@Blueblotts You do? Most people don't know where it is!

@Blueblotts Sorry bree, how rude of me😔 It's not long now, I've just done by shopping today😄 Have you got much to get ready for?

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Sup @CheAntoine ? How are you today?

@CheAntoine Well I do:) Do you guys have any customs other than the usual (mince pies, Christmas trees) for Christmas in Trinidad?

@Stablish You should be sorry. How dare you be offline at 3am?! No, haven't started the Chrimbo shopping yet. Each year my brother and I have a gift-off and see who can give the most awkward present (I gave him designer shaving cream (he is unable to grow facial hair) and he gave me JLS condoms) I'm currently brainstorming ideas for him...What's on your Christmas lists? @Stablish @CheAntoine

@Blueblotts LMFA, Christmas sounds great in your household😃 My mum started a thing last year where we get each other toys lol, I live in a house of four men so we don't even have decorations 😒 I got most of mine today😃 You should look up a calendar called goats on trees lol, I've seen it about, he should love that🎄🐑😜

*Goats in trees😁

@Stablish I'm great, you?

@Blueblotts A type of Carolingian called parang

@CheAntoine Oops, I meant caroling!

@Blueblotts Books, Tshirts!

@Blueblotts @Stablish How was your day?

@Stablish Them goats are the best things I've seen all day. Not to be obvious, but HOW DO THEY GET UP THERE XD That is a sorry state of affairs when you have no decorations on Christmas. I don't see why the fact that you are 4 men living together should get in the way of Christmas Decorations....Just sayin'. I am gonna intrude further and ask what presents you received;)

@CheAntoine I'll google it;) what kind of books are you looking for, man? My day was crazy, thanks for asking:)

@CheAntoine I'm all good, just working my last half hour then it's the weekend for me, have you been up 2 much?

@Blueblotts lol, that's what I was thinking :-/ Some board middle eastern men in my estimation. I know, I'm the only one who is bothered by them really. I should go ahead and decorate anyway I think. Intrude away, last year I got some nano bugs, there little electronic bugs that race round a circuit XD This year lego hopefully😃 I sound like such a kid lol How about you?

@Blueblotts Adventure's my favourite!

@Stablish Nah, getting in my 8 hrs! :)

@Stablish Lol, at least it keep then off the streets! Are nano bugs anything like those mad hex bugs:? This year I'm looking for a cloak (or failing all else, suitable fabric to make one), books and a return plane trip to England for Easter (which I probably won't be getting)...So nothing much, hehe. Lego sounds awesome😄

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