Haunted House.

CuriousCat • 207 followers

Step step.
Bang.
What was that?
Don't hear anything.
Don't see anything.
Step step step.
Drat.
Dead end.
Turn around.
Step step.
Door! Open?
Nope, locked.
Step step.
Heart racing.
Goosebumps.
Stupid dare.
Why accepted?
Step step step.
Another door!
Locked?
No! Yes! Continue!
Step step.
Groan.
Crap, what was..?
Something moved.
Scared.
Do I look?
Too scared. Can't move.
Something on my shoulder!
Scream!
I'm gonna die!
Lord why?!

...

Oh..
No. False alarm.
Just my friend. He got dared too!

#general #haunted-house #psychological-horror #suspense #teenage-dare

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Comments & Feedback (11)

Apr 30, 2012 at 6:20 PM

Great as a very short story! I was petrified!!😳😳😳👻👻👻

Apr 30, 2012 at 6:22 PM

@michga Haha! I'm glad you liked it!

Apr 30, 2012 at 6:38 PM

Cooleo👻👻👻👻🎃🎃🎃🎃👻👻👻👻🎃🎃🎃🎃

Apr 30, 2012 at 6:39 PM

🎃🎃👻👻👻👻🎃🎃🎃🎃👻👻👻👻

Apr 30, 2012 at 6:44 PM

That really freaked me out!! In a good way!!! 👻🎃👻🎃👻🎃👻🎃👻🎃👻

Apr 30, 2012 at 6:55 PM

@kateiscoolyeah @GizMonkey I'm glad both of you liked it! ^^

Apr 30, 2012 at 6:59 PM

@CuriousCat awesomely suspenseful!!! Lol

Apr 30, 2012 at 7:03 PM

@Dovahkiin Ha! Thanks again!

Apr 30, 2012 at 8:48 PM

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Apr 30, 2012 at 8:54 PM

Nice tempo! Enjoyed it :)

Apr 30, 2012 at 9:21 PM

I really felt I was there nice piece

May 1, 2012 at 4:50 AM

@Pug @waynedoz @blindmuggy Thank you each of you! Since everyone's liked this so much, perhaps I'll do more! :)

May 1, 2012 at 7:01 PM

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