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Song Of Rain

I went through a storm,
Through troubles and pain,
To find you my love,
I sang the song of rain.

Oh, my love,
Oh, where have you gone?
Ever since the rain,
I still sing your song.

Raining from the heavens,
My angel uncontained,
I still cannot find you,
Since that night that it rained.

Oh, my love,
Oh, where have you gone?
Ever since the rain,
I still sing your song.

Years have gone by,
Oh, give me a sign,
Will I ever find you?
Oh, say you'll be mine?

Oh, my love,
Oh, where have you gone?
Ever since the rain,
I still sing your song.

When will I find you?
Will you remember me?
I will keep searching,
You set me free.

Oh, my love,
Oh, where have you gone?
Ever since the rain,
I still sing your song.

You set me free,
From the troubles of life,
I now need you,
You cleanse me of strife.

Oh, my love,
Oh, where have you gone?
Ever since the rain,
I still sing your song.

Oh, my love,
Oh, where have you gone?
Ever since the rain,
I still sing your song.

Hi thanks for every thing you great writers have written. This is my first ever song and I would greatly appreciate and comments about it but I will ask that please criticise lightly, this is my first song after all. Thanks again. Davedave16

Davedave16

@Davedave16

If life is an open door, why am I always trapped on the outside. With all this space around me and no where to go, no one to share it with. The cruel and unforgiving darkness becomes a blessing and my mind blurs the lines that others have set in place for me. I am at one with my self. I am at one with others. I am at one with the darkness. I am at one with the unknown.

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Comments & Feedback (25)

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@jan3601 thanks 4 that I almost forgot

You should really enter this in AWriterGirl's contest! The theme is rain! Really amazing poem πŸ‘

@ClaireTilley it's 4 the competition do hopefully I'll b in with a chance of winningπŸ˜„

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@Davedave16 I'm sure you will with a poem like this

@ClaireTilley thanks for the support, have you submitted anything?

Awesome song! I find it ironic, I wrote a song called ago of rain in study hall today!

@Davedave16 I wrote a song in algebra today.. I still need to type it though

@AWriterGirl @ClaireTilley I'm happy for both of you and I think that a healthy competition brings everyone closer together. Claire, I wish you the best of luck

@AWriterGirl when are the winners going to be announced?

@Davedave16 tomorrow at 7!

@AWriterGirl damn I'm not gonna be able to read the results until Sunday 😰😨😱😭

@Davedave16 and the best of luck to you too! I just posted mine.. Not sure if it's as good as yours :)

@Davedave16 Ohhh :| well it's okay! That's only the day after.

@AWriterGirl luckily it's only a day after

This is an excellent piece of writing. πŸ˜ƒβœ¨

@blacknova thanks, comments like this make me smile :)

@blacknova this is also m piece for AWriterGirl's nature song contest 😁

@Davedave16 I'm sure you'll do great. You have a natural talent for writing. πŸŒŸπŸ˜„

@blacknova thanks, I used to be terrible at writing on the spot but this app has really inspired me to go far.

@Davedave16 it's really good. I haven't been doing it long but I love it! πŸ˜ƒ

@blacknova same

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