Tell me how to fall for you
The way that you want me to.
Do you want a Romantic?
You're far to pedantic.
Is St. Valentine your bag
Or do you find it a drag?
How about Lothario?
Is that the way you want this to go?
What about Casanova?
Passionate, so oh la la
But gone by tomorrow
So I guess that's a solid no.
You're just oh, such a pain,
Dancing shoeless in the rain
Then wanting to snuggle
On the sofa, a double,
Then wanting some smooth tricks
Like romantic picnics,
Then reciting poetry
With roses, most definitely.
It's all quite confusing
So new and I'm loosing
My feet as I fall
Head over heels, and all
I knew of love
Doesn't matter because
You're different, it's true!
There's no-one like you.
There's no way I can ever keep
It all up but I'm in too deep.
So how do I love you for the rest of our days?
How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
Because I don't quite know how you have this planned.
Can I run after you? I don't know if I can.
But it's oh so sweet
This bumpy road where our feet
Get caught so we fall on the stones
Into one amorous heap, I don't know how this goes.
How do you want me
To love you, my sweetie?
How did I love thee today?
Let me count the ways.
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@naaviie Delilah: confuddling people to the point of spontaneous combustion since 1995 ๐๐ thanks perhaps you should get some air and walk it off
@Delilah - hahahaha you little minx! I am going even more crazy than I already am. You tugging at my heart strings just brings it all to the surface. Mwah
@naaviie it was 'jatt' he said 'brilliant', he even posted an anti plagiarism poem, yet half the things he posts are quotes and jokes from the Internet!
@Nom - OH right I guessed so! Half his stuff is rubbish, but I hope the stuff I've liked is original? Was it him that created all the fuss? Or is it number 1? I didn't really know...
@iPuss annoys me too - sad to see works you love bumped down by thugs like that / something the other day was quite rude too (offensive)
@iPuss yes. Some of his stuff IS original and quite sweet. But he is always canvassing for followers yet he hardly follows anyone, and he posts a lot of stuff from the Internet too
@Nom @naaviie On another note It was pointed out that quotes and jokes do so well because of the amount of younger members. Unlike us alot of them dont bother to read long posts and just end up liking the shorter ones. I suppose thats were it comes down too. I mean have you noticed that all the same people comment on our work? I think its why 1 and 3 are so popular!
@iPuss I agree! There is a group of us who follow each other and all comment on each other's work, but outside that group there does seem to be an awful lot of kids
@iPuss to be fair to ollyboyne he has recently posted some original stuff...which has comparatively few likes!
@Nom Im not against kids its good they can even be bothered to read lol. Any way, let us delete all this and play nice. :P
@Nom haha no worries all this stuff arrived on the front of my iPod and I was a little confuddled but let's just keep it nice folks
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