The pressure is on me,
How much can I take,
It's only me that they see,
I notice my feet quake,
I feel like I'm under water,
Or smothered in acid fog,
I know the wish to slaughter,
My pride, my life they'll rob,
The searing heat makes me sweat,
My hands are shaking too,
I know their goals have been met,
And I don't know what to do.
Your feedback helps Diddle understand what's working
!!!! www.happycows.eu. Helo! Γa Va? The name's Dana, Dana Dana, (Day.na). I'm 13, come from a big family of very... loud people, despite that I am quiet, and keep to myself. I like spongebob (He made me who I am today.) I usually write poems, sometimes a story, and blogs if I'm lacking in poetry ideas. 'One can be addicted to a certain type of sadness' unknown person, please stop writing about me. ‘‘‘‘
Where did I go. Where have I been. I'm really not sure. The things that I've seen. My minds all a flutter. My life's in a rut. I really am wishing. My door would stay shut. But something is in here.
Are you looking for me. Or searching threw the dusty remains. Have you set me free. Or have you tighten the chains.
It's like you're trapped in a cage. No one sees it. Not even you. You don't know what it's made of, you don't even know where it came from. It forbids you to move freely.
Sticks and stones - I suppose there's only so many times you can shift your weight between the balls of your feet and blink while they, with their forked tongues of concrete and stone are throwing...
Destructing everything in sight On a mission to win the last fight Determination to self destruct All the fears that the nightmares construct.
You're punch connects with mine,. And our knees soon meet,. Synchronised in perfect time,. The same steps with our feet,. Blood spills on my cheek,. And it also spills on yours,.
I am not the same as you. Your like everyone else a program. You don't feel the emotions I feel. You can't you don't understand them. You've never experienced been depressed.
So it was all a lie, One final lie to fool us all. We've said are final goodbye, Now you've come to enthral. leave me be, I want no part in your games. Let me be free, Keep me from the flames.
@Diddle well I certainly wouldn't like to be walking through acid fog! So it definitely works! ππ
Want to join the conversation? Sign in to leave a comment.