The Very First Letter

DuRoLuRo • 161 followers

My head is spinning.
My heart you're pinning.
Sending out mixed emotions.
I'm on the ground in deep commotion.

Are you talking to him?
Or are you talking to me?
I'm really trusting, but I feel the need,
to express these emotions, deep within me.

You're smiling at someone, could it be me?
I love you my dear. So please just help me.
I'm down on the ground.
You're teasing around.

Is it here you're going?
I bleed this longing.
The first is a pretty letter, I love you oh mine.
Please treat me better, I'll give you my life.

#emotional-poetry #general #relationship-uncertainty #unrequited-love

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