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As He Bites

Eyes stare cold frost intensely burning, warm lips yearning

painting saliva across his kissing tools with his tongue, so highly strung,

so intense, powerfully immense like a cat poised ready to pounce, without sound soaking up her scent... Unaware, naive of his dark intent

he closes in and nuzzles her neck... Oblivious to the threat she submits as he licks her wet chest to breast so tightly pressed slowly pulling at clothes desires of undressed

Clothes come loose
peeling like fruit wanting her juice

The trickle of her nectar the spark for his fuse

he stands back amused he doesn't like his fruit bruised

so he engages softly holds her wrists
showers her in romantic kiss reaching a tantric state of forbidden bliss

she feels for his heart but the beat don't miss there is no beat to her whiteness

could he be seedless, needless, faithless, heartless, she wants him regardless to extinguish her fire... Before it expire as knowledge transpire Naughty girl shouldn't consort with a vampire.

Β©Edward Gee Humphrey

Edhum3

@Edhum3

Just spreading some words

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Wow smouldering πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯love this πŸ’‹πŸ‘β€

Whoaaaaa! Love the way you rhythm and rhyme! πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

@sjw @naaviie He got that Vampire Beat ladies!!

@naaviie @MrsS I'm waiting for the bite πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š

@sjw Now now, naughty Sienna, he's got FANGS!!! πŸ˜³πŸ’‰

@MrsS the saying "no pain no gain" comes to mind! πŸ˜œπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@sjw πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ 😠 Bad girl! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@MrsS @sjw - oooo I wouldn't mind a bite 😘

@naaviie he's gonna be a busy vamp! πŸ‘ΏπŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜

@sjw - got the victims lined up!

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@MrsS @naaviie @sjw lol I'm cuing up girlsπŸ˜‰

@ckahn yey!!! Love your new pic too πŸ’šπŸ’š

Your writing is s***-hot mate. Loving reading your work

Oooo I like thisπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@naaviie ☺

@wolfie thanks Wolfie means a lot beats chest nice to see the lads represent haha

@MrsS @naaviie @ckahn @misslittleDHP form an orderly queue pls girlies! πŸ‘Ώβ€

@RichWithey thanks Rich, I'm a fan of your work too ;)

@sjw πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚we'll be good kittiesπŸ˜‰

@ckahn not! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Did you not realise this would cause a stampede?!? Lmao btw it is very good 😘

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@sjw nakuma mutata ;)

@sjw I would bite you! Haha purrrr

@sjw @ckahn @wolfie @naaviie @RichWithey @naaviie @MrsS hey you guys/girls please review my sequel to this I've just finished the final edit and I'm looking to publish in a little book with some other scribbles, feedback positive or negative will be greatly welcomed 😊

O it's called he bites two well

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