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Fly With Me...

Guys, I'm sure this is wrong because I've never done free verse before so sorry if I look stupid now. Criticisms would be appreciated though. Thanks:)

Flying high. Just come with me now.
We can leave you and I, together;always.
Forget the past, they're just nightmares lurking at the back of your mind.
Fly with me... Let yourself go. I won't let you fall. You're too precious to me.
To meaningful to me.
Let's fly away and see where it takes us.
To the moon and back?
Still, reality will be far behind our shoulders and off our minds when we're flying high.
Let your troubles flow like a river. Don't resist flying and dreaming.
The world doesn't matter when my world consists of only you.
Just fly with me.
Soar until all the bad memories you have, are only memories.

Emily_InspiresAll

@Emily_InspiresAll

Just some naive teenage girl writing poems with no confidence... O_o Ed sheeran, the hunger games, all time low, the midnight beast and other stuff is basically my life. Ps I'm sorry I'm not good at being sociable. :)

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Comments & Feedback (8)

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Absolutely fine hun. ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@leelee101 oh ok well thank you then:) ๐Ÿ˜˜ Also thanks for the repost!

Just one thing did you mean "meaningful" instead of "manfully"? Anyway this is great write :)

@FriendToAnimals haha yes I did sorry I missed that! Thanks:) and thank you!:)

Your welcome

There's no really hard and fast rules. You most certainly don't look stupid. Well done it flows really well and you have used the theme ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’š

@eddie12309 oh okay thank you:) I'm glad you don't think I look stupid:)

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