Contest horror EXAMPLe

If your stuck at my contest , here is an example of what I'm looking for.

As Lucy crept along the hallway of the old deserted house she heard her phone ring. It was her boyfriend Matt. " hey Luce you gotta help there's a a a ahhhhh!" The phone was cut off. She turned around to make for the stairs but a girl stood in front of her. It had a grey face and a floppy neck. She was missing an eye and her blonde hair reached her waist. Her lips were bleeding and her head was slashed. It's leg was the wrong way round and she wore a white dress. (•description•). She put her hands on Lucy's shoulder. Then her mouth opened so wide you could fit a basketball in there and she swallowed Lucy whole. (•death#1)

A few days later at about 10pm Chelsea thought about her missing friend Lucy she was passing through a park on her way home. A girl in a white dress appeared in front of her. Chelsea stood still, frozen in fear. The girl turned Her whole head in a 360turn. Then she opened her mouth wide and Chelsea knew no more. (• death#2)

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