Heartsick

Fly10 • 425 followers

Stop it now
you're opening a cut
I thought had healed
When you decided
to move on
this was not the deal
My dreams have become

Twisted

I can't I'm not
Sleep Free

In them, I see you inside
A faceless girl
Not me
Tortured
I wake sickened
with a pain that
Stops. and. starts
Ever since we've been apart
Like a needle in my heart
You need to
GET OUT
of my head now
Your time in here is done
You left your scar already
So Go
And stay gone

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Fly10 Leigh 2012

#emotional-trauma #general #heartbreak #lost-love #psychological-pain #relationship-aftermath

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Comments & Feedback (18)

Jun 13, 2012 at 12:16 PM

Wow - powerhouse stuff. Awesome structure too Hun. Like this 😘

Jun 13, 2012 at 12:17 PM

LOVE THIS...powerful and the structure is fab:):):)

Jun 13, 2012 at 12:19 PM

Wow, really good !!! Deep and true 😁

Jun 13, 2012 at 12:22 PM

@Dimi Thank you for repost😊

Jun 13, 2012 at 12:24 PM

@Fly10 you are welcome (: m

Jun 13, 2012 at 12:25 PM

@leelee101 @misslittleDHP Thanks both for repost😚😘 Structure didn't turn out exactly as I wanted-edit button wasn't playing ball 😠 Close enough though, & all my thoughts got in there eventually 😌

Jun 13, 2012 at 12:27 PM

@DaddyDooDahs Thank you. It's based exactly on how I felt when I woke😞 Appreciate your comment 😌😚

Jun 13, 2012 at 12:30 PM

@Fly10 big hugs ☺

Jun 13, 2012 at 1:02 PM

@melody Repost much appreciated 😊

Jun 13, 2012 at 1:45 PM

Powerfully written 😽

Jun 13, 2012 at 1:49 PM

@kivihe Thanks for repost 😚😊

Jun 13, 2012 at 1:49 PM

@sjw Thank you lady 😌

Jun 13, 2012 at 2:12 PM

@Fly10 no problem 😽

Jun 13, 2012 at 2:32 PM

Very cool

Jun 13, 2012 at 2:34 PM

@ckahn Thank you 😌

Jun 14, 2012 at 12:29 AM

I love the power and rawness of this!

Jun 14, 2012 at 12:34 AM

@Nom Thank you-it was written from the heart ❤

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