I like this one. It's her birthday. :) VERY EXTRA VERY EXTRA VERY EXTRA LONG PART!! it took me three days to write it!!
"Happy Birthday Julia!" I woke up surrounded my by family.
"Wha. It's s so early." I yawned.
"It's your birthday Julia. Wake up early!!!" mom said.
I looked down and saw a pile of presents waiting for me. I felt like an eight year old. Not 18.
"Ok!!! What did I get?!"
"Open and see" my father said. "I'm not working today so you'll have an awesome birthday."
"Thanks dad."
I opened my first present, it was from Daisy, a little Barbie doll.
"Thank you so much little Daisy!!"
I planted a small kiss on her cheek.
Next one was from Tracy, a pink dress with diamonds encrusted at the top, a perfect fit.
"Trace!!! This is beautiful!! Where on earth did you get such great taste?? Thank you so much!!"
I hugged her and moved on to my next present.
From Ally, it was purple Dr Dre beats.
"It's not a great present Julia. Sorry but it goes with what Tom got you."
"It's perfect Ally. Thank you."
The next present was from Baxter, a game-boy. I think it was his but he's so nice to give it to me!!!
"Aww thank you Baxy Boy. I love it!!"
"Its already got games inside" he said proudly. I hugged him and moved onto Tom's present. It was the latest iPod that came out only last week!!!
"Yo Tom. Thanks its awesome."
"Welcome little Julia. 18 now!! Only a year younger than me! Growing up fast." I playfully punched him in the shoulder.
"Julia. Me and dad have got you a shared present. Come downstairs and in the drive."
I went downstairs and opened the front door and my jaw dropped.
Outside, there was the newest Lamborghini AND in white!!!
"M mom, Da dad!!! This is AMAZING!! Thank you!!!"
I hugged both of them as hard as I could!!
This was positively my favourite car ever!!!
Suddenly, I saw Alex pull up in our drive.
"Happy Birthday Julia!! Like your new car then?"
"Oh my god yeah!! It's beautiful............... Wait how did you know?"
"I told you. Me and your parents have been planning!!"
I kissed him, in front of my family. Ally covered Tracy and Baxter's eyes. I laughed, "Ally, their gonna have boyfriends and girlfriends when their older. You can let them see."I said sarcastically.
"Yeah yeah. I can't believe your growing up little jewel. My age now."
"Don't call me that!! Shut up!!" I joked.
"So. Im gonna get ready, I'll spend the day at home."
"Nope sorry Julia. Your going out with me. You can't come home until 8 o clock." Alex said.
"What??! Fine then. When are we going?"
"In an hour. Get ready quick." "Sure."
We all went inside and I went up to my room.
Hmm birthday dress.
I looked in my wardrobes and I couldn't find a thing!
Nooo. Oh wait, what was that?
I looked and saw a really mini dress a centimetre below my bum. It was purple and sparkly. It's beautiful!!!
I have GOT to wear that.
I carefully took it out and spread it on my bed. It's perfect.
I went in the shower and turned the water really hot. When I came out my skin was pink and I felt really steamy. Phew.
I brushed and dried my hair. I'm gonna go to the hairdressers today. I have to.
I ironed and put my dress on. It looked stunning!!
I did my hair into a messy bun because of course on going to the hairdressers. Maybe I'll get it free. My dads Tom Cruise AND it's my 18th birthday today.
Haha :P.
I went downstairs and everybody gasped as I went in the living room. "Would you like some waffles with extra Nutella for breakfast, Your Highness?"
"MOM!! Don't call me that!! Yeah can I have waffles?"
"Mommy's Super Delicious Waffles with Extra Chocolatey Nutella Combo Special coming up."
"I love you mom."
"I know I do too." Everyone laughed as they ate.
"Oh hey, Julia do you wanna do anything in particular before I take you out today?"
"Do you mind of we go to the hairdressers. I really need to get my hair cut."
"Sure babe. Whatever you want."
Mom served me up with my Mommy's Super Delicious Waffles With Extra Chocolatey Nutella Combo Special. It was HUGE!! There was Nutella dripping and whipped cream, a bit of Canadian maple syrup too.
Not a single healthy thing in sight!! "I'm gonna put on like a stone mom!"
"Good honey. You need some fat."
I laughed as I ate and I nearly choked.
After I finished Alex and I said bye to my family. "Have a nice time together." whispered Ally. "Sure. Love ya." I whispered back.
I got into my new car with Alex. My dad had done all the insurance thingymabobs all I had to do is drive.
...................
Ok this is one of the most awesome cars I've ever been in!! The engine is really loud so it gets everyone's attention.
Also, I didn't know that my dad had put the number plate as CrU15E so everyone knew me and pointed. It's so amazing!!!
I finally pulled up at the hairdressers, I was so lucky!! My friend Samantha was working there. She always does my hair!! I love her.
"Hey Sammy. It's me ya know Julia Cruise."
"Sure I do!! Come to do your hair? Ya don't need to wait. I'll be two secs. Oh and if I may ask, who is this young and handsome gentlemen?"
"Haha no need to call him that!! He's my boyfriend Alex."
"I thought you loved me!!! We've always been together." she said sarcastically.
"As a friend dumbo. I'm NOT a lesbian."
"Pity. Ok so I'll be back in two secs I'll get ready. Take a seat."
"Sure and thanks. I wanted to also say its my birthday today."
"Wow congrats. How old? 16?" "No. I wish!! 18." "You won't be needing to take your purse out then. Birthday girls are free!"
I hugged her and went to take a seat.
"So Julia. I'm gonna go out, is it ok if your here?"
"Yeah. It's fine. I've got Samantha for company!!" "Ok love you. Bye."
Alex went off and I sat by myself feeling a pang of loneliness in me. But not for long, because Samantha came skipping along singing.
As she did my hair we chatted about out life AND love life.
Apparently she was 24 and had a boyfriend called Jack.
Soon she fell silent and concentrated on cutting my hair.
She was finished in an hour. I looked in the mirror and my jaw dropped.
There, staring back at me was a beautiful eighteen year old, extremely pretty, her hair shoulder length and curled. I also had a side fringe that was straightened.
I looked perfect!!
Then Alex came back just in time. His jaw dropped too and then he came to kiss me.
My tongue was just about to enter in his mouth when I knew Samantha was watching us. I blushed and giggled.
I pulled away and thanked Samantha.
"We should also get together sometime." "Yeah that would be great!! Anyway thanks! Bye."
I walked off hand in hand with Alex.
We got in the car but Alex wanted to drive.
"I have to take you somewhere special!!"
We were driving for an hour but then he pulled up at a REALLY posh hotel.
"I forgot to tell you. My family owns this hotel." he lead me in and we walked to the lift.
Then we walked to a room and he stopped out side a door.
On it, it said
'To my beautiful girlfriend Julia, Happy 18th Birthday.'
MY NAME WAS ENGRAVED ON A DOOR!! That is amazing.
I opened the door and saw a huge suite. It was purple with a GIGANTIC bed!!!
Perfect for the two of us!
There was a huge TV and on the walls there pictures of Nutella everywhere. Also on the kitchen table was the biggest Nutella jar I had ever seen!!
It was heaven!!
"So err this is kinda your room. We can stay here together sometime after we come back?" "SURE!! This is heaven Alex. Your so rich!"
"So are you." "Yeah. I guess. Do you know Alex. I actually never wanted my dad to be famous. We're in all the magazines. Like give it a break sometimes. Paparazzi, magazines, camera's. Fame. It's horrible." "Yeah. I would feel the same. But it's really good we get some time alone from tomorrow onwards." "It'll be really nice. Thanks for all this Alex. I love you." "Love ya too babe."
3 o clock. What do we do??? Gotta kill time. "Julia. Come here. In the kitchen. Quick." "Sure yeah."
I walked to the kitchen. Funny. The door was closed. Huh? Didnt Alex JUST call me from there? I opened the door and suddenly...............................
"SURPRISE!!!"
I saw all my school friends jump out from all the hiding places!!
Oh wow! I thought they forgot me.
There was all my best friends!!
Betty
Hannah
Kate
Juliet
And.................... Lily.
"My god. Guys? Your here?" "You didn't think we actually forgot your birthday!?" called Lily.
"No b but?!"
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!"
"Thanks guys! You coming to my party this evening?"
"Sure we are. We wouldn't miss it for the world." said Betty.
"Well I gotta get ready. I am. I just need makeup." "I'll always be ready to help. I bought my makeup bag!!!" said Juliet.
Well Juliet was vain. I guess. I don't like to say that but wherever she went she bought her makeup bag. It was more like a makeup SUITCASE!! But it's useful at times. :). "Sure. Come on lets get cracking."
For the next two hours we sat on the bed putting makeup on. Alex bought speakers so we plugged our iPods in and listened to music as we did this.
We chatted just catching up.
After we'd finished we looked amazing!! "So what shall we do?" said Hannah.
"Watch a movie?" suggested Kate.
"Perfect. Thanks Kate." I said. She beamed.
Half an hour later we were all tucked up in bed watching a movie called 'John Tucker must Die." it was awesome!! I love my friends!!
I gasped!! It was already 7 o clock!!
"Guys. We gotta leave its seven already!!" "Yeah. Let's go. Ya don't wanna be late for your own party!" giggled Hannah.
We flattened our hair, looked in the mirror and finally we were ready!! My 18th birthday. Wow.
I drove everybody home. Apparently they were all staying over!! Yay!!
We got home at exactly 8 on the dot. I looked outside the house. It looked weird. All the lights off and the blinds down? I walked to the door with Alex and my friends next to me.
I clicked open the door
And.........................
Nobody was there? I went to the kitchen and
"SURPRISE!!!" everyone that I liked and knew was there.
Suddenly Tom called out "Lets get this party started!!!" and out of nowhere the lights turned on and music was coming from everywhere!
Everyone started dancing and I saw that they all had drinks in their hands.
My mom came over to me. "You like? Ally's the DJ by the way!"
"No way!! Seriously? This is awesome mom. How did you get the house decorated so quickly?"
"Its your mom who your talking to. Im known for getting things ready real fast. Come on Julia go and have fun. Drinks are on the table." she winked.
I bumped into Ally when I was going to get a drink. She was with her boyfriend, Luke.
"Hey Julia. Happy birthday. This is an awesome party." Luke said.
"Thanks Luke. Have fun."
I grabbed a can of beer and started drinking. Alex was there too.
"Wanna dance?" "Of course. Julia, I have a present for you but I have to give it to you alone."
"Alex!! You've done enough!! You gave me my room in your hotel. That was too much!!"
"Yeah. But this is important. Based on our whole lifetime." "Ok........." I felt suspicious. Was he really asking me that? Hmm well I'll see.
I grabbed another can of beer and he pulled me to the dance floor.
Soon the crowd surrounded us, clapping and cheering.
Oh no!! Everyone was watching us. We made up a dance as we went along.
When we finished everyone clapped harder and Alex pulled me in for a kiss.
Everyone 'aahhhh ed' and I blushed.
I drank more and became drunk.
It was like 2 am now. Everyone was starting to leave. Alex suddenly pulled me upstairs whispering something in my ear so fast that I couldnt understand him at all. He went into my room and I followed.
We sat on the bed and he said , "your present. It's err well my present too. You'll see. happy birthday Julia."
He got down on one knee and said, "will you marry me Julia Alicia Cruise?"
I was too shocked to speak this is what I expected. Tears from my eyes and I managed to choke out a yes.
He pulled me on the bed and I went through the experience of my first ever sex with the boy I loved most.
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