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Moon-rise #5

-1 year later-

It's my 17th birthday today, I'm so excited. I'm having a huge party! I'm mostly looking forward to seeing Bleddyn, he's still my soul mate and he says that he has a surprise for me!
As I searched my wardrobe for my new dress I couldn't help wonder what the surprise was, I mean who doesn't try to figure out a surprise? When I had eventually found the dress I couldn't help but sigh at it, it was perfect, the bottom of the front fell freely to my knees and the back trailed across the floor, it was a smokey black with small sequins dotted over it so that it occasionally glittered in the light. I slipped it on and went to
style my hair. When I finished I put some make-up on and went to see what I looked like in the mirror. Perfect! My hair had extensions in it so I could curl it, my make up was perfect and my dress looked lovely. I hurried on some new black converse as I heard the door bell ring, I ran down the stairs and opened the door to let in the guests. Fi, Levi, Bleddyn and about 20 other people hurried in smiling,
"Happy Birthday Mads!!!" they all cheered. We all dat down in the lounge and I suddenly got bombarded with large and small boxes wrapped in different colored wrapping paper.
"Aww thanks guys! " I said happily. After all my presents we went inti the kitchen for dinner, there was chocolates, crisps, sandwiches, pizza, pasta, pies and loads more! I grabbed a plate an started to fill it up, Bleddyn cam over and sat with me as I started to eat,
"You know I'm not gonna date you if you get fat" he joked
"haha funny!"
"So like my out-fit?" asked Bleddyn ruffling his collar
"yeah, you look very nice I must say!" he did, he was wearing black chinos, a white top and black suit jacket with a thin black tie, his high-tops where maroon-red with a white Nike sign on the side of them!
"Thanks" Bleddyn said, he got up, kissed my head and walked over to Levi to chat.
-After the party!-
Everyone had left except Bleddyn who was hanging around helping me clear up all the mess,
"You can go home if you want" I said walking over to Bleddyn who embraced me tightly but in a nice way,
"I haven't given you your surprise" he winked
"Oh yeah! And you forgot my present" I said un-tying his tie and throwing it onto the table,
"The surprise come with a present" he leaned in to kiss me, I stood on my tip toes so that I could reach his lips. We strode there as one until I broke away gently,
"Can it wait?" I purred
"Hmm I'm afraid not. We should get going come on"
"Ok.."
Bleddyn led me down the street towards the park. When we got there my breath nearly left my body, the park (my favorite place EVER!) looked amazing, on the lake you could see the moon and stars reflected on it, all the trees surrounding the lake had fairy lights dotted on them. Bleddyn walked me down to the lake where a huge red rug was placed on the green grass, there where candles around it, everything resembled a dream, it was so perfect! We sat on the rug and stared at the lake for awhile until Bleddyn broke the silence,
"So you like it?"
"I absolutely love it! Best surprise ever!"
"oh this isn't the surprise"
"what is it then?"
"well..." Bleddyn reached into his jacket's pocket and pulled out a tiny blue box with white ribbon wrapped around it,
"Maddie, will you do me the honer of marrying me?" I sat there shocked,
"What?" I stammered
"Will you marry me?"
"Bleddyn I'm only 17!"
"Who cares? No one can stop love" he smiled sweetly at me, I didn't know what to do, say yes at 17! Or say no and maybe lose the love of my life!!!
"Maddie will you marry me?" he said taking my hands, I sat there in silence until I decided,
"Bleddyn I'm sorry-"
"it's ok" he interrupted,
"let me finish, I'm sorry Bleddyn but your going to put up with me for the rest of your life"
"huh?"
"yes"

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@LifeIsMusic so is this the end? If it is, brilliantly done!

Oooh this is BEAUTIFUL! So romantic... β€πŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’—

Awww how sweet so romantic! πŸ’‹

@BlackKnight thank you! And no it'd not :) @Petitpois22 thank you!! @eragonaddict ;) thank you

Awwwwww so sweet

I want more ;(

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